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Lets start off with your Enter Page, your Enter Page, needs to be more organised. It has things all around it. To start I'd like to say that if I give improvements; you don't have to do them it’s just my opinion, so seriously don't take it seriously. (Don't worry not picking on you I’m going to start saying that at the start of every review I write :P). Well the enter page, I'll say this, what’s the point? It's like an advertising page because of the Reviews Link. But it's OK to have an enter page, I'm not saying you shouldn't but maybe not advertise people here because it means people won't get to go on your site and will click on that link and forget about you, and we don't want that! But...if you do insist on having the link there maybe use a link effect, and put the information in a table? It'll look neater. Everything else is fine though, well done.
First Impression
My first impressions are "EWWWWW" because You're site isn't organised! (Sorry if its too criticizing)The layout at the top looks boring. Also why have you put '471 Hits'? I know its your hit counter but why the hits bit? I think you should take the end bit off and add something like "thorns on a rose" or "times i fell" or "times we touched". It'll make the page look a little more professional.
Layout/Coding
Text box codes should be used, I don't like the link effect here though, a bit Ugly and maybe something a 'Professional' piczo maker would use, maybe tone it down a bit and use a different code? I'm not saying its a bad code, but with a text size like that it doesn't suit your site. I'll move on now...
Content
entertainment
Entertainment:there quite a bit actually, it would keep the viewers interested. Maybe add a bit more each week, it would keep people coming back for more! Nice ideas though! Keep it up.
Competitions
No Competitions, I understand it's a roleplay site, but since you have stuff "OTHER" than roleplay maybe you could add compeitions and stuff like that as well, it would be a nice way, of getting hits.
HTML codes
Maybe add a lot more. I can't really comment on this because everyone has the same codes, even I do! Keep adding though!
Spelling/Grammer
PLEASE DON'T USE WORDS LIKE "WOT" or "2" or "u" or "r" and stuff like that. Use them on MSN and stuff like that but not on your site, it drives people crazy!
Conclusion/Summery
I like your site, just sort the background colours out a little and the enter page.It needs some organising but at least you tried there! Also give it a go at making your own stuff. Also I'd like to mention here, that you haven't got a credit page, you need to credit people if you know where you got the stuff you didn't make on your own from! That’s all, keep it up and your site will get better and better! Hope you liked the review and I hope it helps you out in the future! Well done!
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